Question

假設(shè)你們班級(jí)即將召開以“感恩”為主題的班會(huì)，要求向大家介紹一下你最想向誰表達(dá)感恩之情，他或她為你做了什么，你又將怎樣回報(bào)他或她的付出。請(qǐng)結(jié)合上文內(nèi)容，以“Thank you, my…”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。]

要求： 1．句子通順，語意連貫 2．包括所有提示內(nèi)容。 3．80--100詞。
Thank you, my___________

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Answer 1

Thank You, My Mother

Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.

She is the busiest one in my family. She does all the house work for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me. But she never wants anything in return. How will I show my thanks to my mother? First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, I’ll do well in school. Third, I’ll help her do housework when I’m free. I want to make her happy. In a word, I love my mother. (91 words)

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將所提示內(nèi)容的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：owe……to……把……歸功于……；one of the＋最高級(jí)，最……之一；care about關(guān)系；lots of許多；in return作為回報(bào)；do well in在……做的好；連詞wherever，whatever，so，but及序數(shù)詞的使用使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文