Question

寫作
在日常生活（daily life）中，國際互聯(lián)網(wǎng)起著越來越重要的作用。請根據(jù)以下提示，以O(shè)n the Internet為題寫一段50－70字的短文。 國際互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的主要用途

信息	看國際國內(nèi)新聞(news both at home and in the world)，獲取其他信息
通訊	發(fā)e-mail，打電話
學(xué)習(xí)	上網(wǎng)上學(xué)校，閱覽各種書籍，自學(xué)外語
娛樂	欣賞音樂，觀看體育比賽，玩棋牌游戲
生活	購物

 
The Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can
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Answer 1

The Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can learn news both at home and in the world. And we can also learn all kinds of information. We can send e-mails to our friends by Internet. We can even make phone calls, go to net school, read many books and learn foreign languages alone. If you are free, we can enjoy music, watch sports and play chess and cards on the Internet. We can do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的主要用途。本文做給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意從五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行介紹。動(dòng)筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時(shí)態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱應(yīng)該是第一人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達(dá)的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。
點(diǎn)評：在寫書面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的英語，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。