Question

10．九年級學生面臨升學的壓力，每天作業(yè)也很多，學校為達減負提質(zhì)的目的，讓學生們作了一個關(guān)于九年級學生的學習狀況的調(diào)查．通過調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問題：
請你用英語寫一份調(diào)查報告，簡單分析這些問題和產(chǎn)生的原因，并提出相應(yīng)的提高學習效率的建議．

Problems	Reasons	Strategies
1．too much homework 2．not enough exercise 3．little communication among students	1．． 2．．	1．． 2．．      …

要求：1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所給問題和你自己的見解；
2．詞數(shù)不少于80字；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和班級．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We should have less homework so that we may have more free time to arrange our study我們應(yīng)該少一點作業(yè)那樣我們能有更多的空閑的時間去安排我們的學習．
so that引導的目的狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
And we should have more physical exercise to keep healthy我們應(yīng)該有更多的體能鍛煉去保持健康．
動詞不定式to keep healthy做目的狀語．

解答 Hello，boys and girls，
I made a survey about what problems we students of Grade Nine have now．
Most students think we have got too much homework，so they don't have enough time to have physical exercise．Besides，we don't have enough time to communicate with the other students．In order to finish all the homework in time，they have to go to bed late，and often we feel sleepy even in class．（問題原因）
In my opinion，we have to do something to deal with these problems．We should have less homework so that we may have more free time to arrange our study．【高分句型一】And we should have more physical exercise to keep healthy．【高分句型二】What's more，we should have the chances to communicate with the other students to exchange their ideas in studying and life．Therefore，we can improve our study．（建議）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，介紹九年級學生面臨的問題以及解決策略．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：they don't…，they have to…，及We should…等句式的應(yīng)用．寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系．