Question

九年級(jí)學(xué)生面臨著升學(xué)的壓力，他們每天有做不完的作業(yè)，學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)為了采取一些有效的措施提高學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)效率，讓你們調(diào)查了解九年級(jí)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)狀況，你通過(guò)調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)有以下問(wèn)題：

Problems	Reasons	Strategies
too much homework not enough exercise little communication among students	1. 2.---	1. 2.

 請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)課上分析這些問(wèn)題和產(chǎn)生的原因，并提出相應(yīng)提高學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)效，和同學(xué)共同探討。
注意：1.發(fā)言稿的開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，你只需接著寫；
2.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所給問(wèn)題和你自己的分析；
3.詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右。
Hello, boys and girls,
I made a survey about what problems we students of Grade Nine have now.
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Answer 1

Hello, boys and girls,
I made a survey about what problems we students of Grade Nine have now.
Most students think we have got too much homework, so they don’t have enough time to have physical exercise. Besides, we don’t have enough time to communicate with the other students. In order to finish all the homework in time, they have to go to bed late, and often we feel sleepy even in class.
In my opinion, we have to do something to deal with these problems. We should have less homework so that we may have more free time to arrange our study. And we should have more physical exercise to keep healthy. What’s more ,we should have the chances to communicate with the other students to exchange their ideas in studying and life. Therefore ,we can improve our study.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹九年級(jí)學(xué)生面臨的問(wèn)題以及解決策略。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：they don’t ......，they have to......，及We should ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了對(duì)九年級(jí)學(xué)生面臨的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，接下來(lái)介紹九年級(jí)學(xué)生面臨的問(wèn)題，最后寫出自己解決問(wèn)題的建議和策略。此處用了 In order to，go to bed， feel sleepy，deal with，communicate with 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。