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根據(jù)下面的圖畫，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，大約包括6～9個(gè)句子，短文要求達(dá)意，正確、連貫．短文開頭已給出．

It's seven o'clock in the evening.

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學(xué)生：習(xí)作： 　　It's seven o'clock in the evening. Tom's family is(X1) all at home. Tom is listening to the music. His sister is playing(X2) a cat. His father is reading a book, His mother is making a telephone call with(X3) somebody. His grandparents are watching TV. There is a picture and a clock on the wall, and there is a light and some books on the desk. They are all enjoying themself(X4). 　　剖析：family指整個(gè)家庭時(shí)是集體名詞，相應(yīng)的動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，指家庭的一個(gè)個(gè)成員時(shí)，相應(yīng)的動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)．例如： 　　My family is a large one．我家是個(gè)大家庭． 　　My family are all sitting around the table eating．我家人都坐在桌旁吃飯． 　　很顯然文中指的是Tom家的成員，因此謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)改用復(fù)數(shù)are． 　　2．play是玩耍、游樂(lè)；而“拿……玩，以……自?shī)省�，要�?/FONT>play with，此處是逗貓玩，所以應(yīng)改用playing with． 　　3．給某人打電話應(yīng)用make a telephone call to somebody． 　　4．enjoy oneself=have a good time．表示“玩得很高興”．them是復(fù)數(shù)，所以self也應(yīng)改用其復(fù)數(shù)形式selves，即：themselves． 　　總評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，文章語(yǔ)言流暢、時(shí)態(tài)正確、方位有序、意思表達(dá)清楚，文中的錯(cuò)誤主要集中在謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)和一些動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)的搭配上，希望作者引起重視．