Question

下面表格為某市2006年與2013年人們度假方式的情況比較。請(qǐng)依照表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，對(duì)度假方式的變化進(jìn)行簡要的評(píng)析。
要求：1. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；詞數(shù)80--100；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3. 80詞左右。

年度	2006	2013	原因
境外旅游	11%	22%	收入增加
海邊度假	38%	31%	海水污染
爬山野營	11%	34%	回歸自然

參考詞匯：rate比率；income收入
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Answer 1

One possible version
The way people spend their holidays has changed a lot from 2006 to 2013. More people choose to travel abroad now, because their income has increased. They can afford the journeys abroad. As we know, the seaside is a good place for people to spend their holidays. But the rate has dropped by 7% during the past seven years because the sea is being polluted. The dirty water drives many visitors away. However, the number of the people who go climbing and camping is increasing. Why? Because more and more people want t get close to nature.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求對(duì)比介紹人們的度假方式。主要用到過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文能正確的使用時(shí)態(tài)，能合理的使用連詞使文章更有邏輯性，富有條理。用了一些短語和固定句式如: More people choose to travel abroad now, because their income has increased. The dirty water drives many visitors away.等，短文用了一些連詞如：because、but等。使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜化。