Question

根據(jù)所給提示，寫(xiě)一封60 詞左右的信：
假設(shè)你是李磊，你給你的美國(guó)朋友 Jim 寫(xiě)一封信介紹你是如何學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的。信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出， 至少寫(xiě)五句話以上， 多者不限。
關(guān)鍵詞：favorite subject, work hard, practice reading, speaking, listening, writing, keep on doing, remember words, listen to..., watch English videos, talk in English（寫(xiě)作時(shí)，不必局限于所給的關(guān)鍵詞, 可以根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）。
Dear Jim,
How are you? Today I want to tell you about my English study.
                                                  
                                                  
                                                  
                                                  
                                                  
                                                  
                                                  

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
How are you? Today I want to tell you about my English study. You asked me in your last letter about how I learn English because you are going to learn Chinese and you want to know how to study a foreign language. In fact, I don’t have my special way of learning English. Most Chinese students learn English almost in the same way. We learn a lot of words by heart. Usually we read English aloud in the morning and we often do many exercises to make sure we understand what we have learned. Once a week  we are told to write  a composition in English. I think you can also learn Chinese in the same way. I am sure you will benefit a lot。
yours,
Lilei.

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)要求學(xué)生以李磊的身份給吉姆寫(xiě)一封信，說(shuō)說(shuō)你是如何學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的，并且給出了一些關(guān)鍵詞匯。首先，審題時(shí)，應(yīng)適當(dāng)?shù)剡M(jìn)行謀篇布局，然后，再用規(guī)范的語(yǔ)言，流暢的語(yǔ)句，詳細(xì)敘述自己是如何寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)的。另外，還要注意使用一些固定的句式以提高文章的得分等級(jí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文語(yǔ)句流暢，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。如能適當(dāng)使用一些比較高級(jí)的句型及習(xí)慣英語(yǔ)，那就會(huì)提高一個(gè)得分等級(jí)。