Question

寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文介紹一位好友。（建議：為避免透露姓名，女名用Lisa，男名用Mike。）
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
My Friend.
I have a good friend whose English name is Lisa. She is twelve years old and she is a very pretty girl. Everyone in our class including teachers likes her, but I am her best friend.We share everything we have and we nearly talk everything with each other.We both learn well, and we always learn together and help with each other.She was very out-going and cute.She likes telling jokes and funny things.She likes smiling, and you could always find smile blooming in her face.Well，this is my best friend.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I have......；She is......；We share ......；She likes......；and you could always ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我們一起做的事情，最后指出朋友的性格和喜好。此處用了 talk everything with , help with each other, telling jokes, likes smiling, 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。