Question

假設(shè)你將帶你的外教老師在南京游玩一天，請根據(jù)下面的表格寫一個游玩計劃。要求文中必須包括所有要點，80詞左右。

Time	Places and activities	Transport
7:00a.m.-11:00a.m.	Zijin Mountain, climbing the mountain	Taxi
11:30a.m.-12:30a.m.	A restaurant, having lunch	/
1:00p.m.-4:00p.m.	The Confucius Temple, eating local snacks, buying souvenirs(紀念品)	Bus
4:30p.m.-6:00p.m.	Xinjiekou, shopping	Underground

   We are going to have a busy day today.
                                                                                            
                                                                                    
                                                                                            
                                                                                        
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                                 

Answer 1

It will be a tiring day. But I’m sure we will have great fun in Nanjing. I will take my foreign teacher to visit Nangjing for a whole day. First we will start by taxi at 7:00a.m. Our first plan is to visit Zijin Mountain. After that we are going to climb the mountain before 11:00a.m. During 11:30a.m.-12:30a.m,we will find a restaurant to have lunch. After a short rest, we will take a bus to enjoy the Confucius Temple, and eat local snacks and buy some souvenirs there from 1:00p.m.to 4:00p.m. Then we will visit Xinjiekou during 4:30p.m.and 6:00p.m This time we will chose to go there by underground. Before we leave, we are going to go shopping. We believe that we are certain to enjoy ourselves. What an exciting day. I cannot wait.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給表格內(nèi)容完成這篇游記作文，我們要用準(zhǔn)確的英語句子把內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達出來。寫作中要包含你和你的外教一天在不同的時間段所游覽的旅游景點和主要活動，以及乘坐的交通工具等，可針對提示進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不可偏多。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般將來時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文全面、詳實地介紹了“我”的游玩計劃，并包含了文中所要求的全部提示信息。其中使用的句式和短語都很準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，.如: Our first plan is to visit Zijin Mountain.我們的第一步是去游覽紫金山和After a short rest, we will take a bus to enjoy the Confucius Temple,短暫休息之后我們將乘坐公交車去欣賞孔子廟，以及連詞和過渡語的準(zhǔn)確運用等，如,First，After that，Then，Before we leave使文章的表達很有邏輯性,更富有條理。