Question

假設(shè)你有一位朋友叫Li Ming，他給你看了他家人的一張照片，照片中有他的家人，還有家人的個(gè)人物品及物品所處位置，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一段70詞左右的小短文。
1 父親，電腦，桌子上； 黑色，。
2 母親，手表，床上；藍(lán)色。
3 兄弟，捧球，床底下；綠色。
4妹妹，鉛筆盒，書(shū)包里；紅色。
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Answer 1

Look at this photo. It is my friend’s family photo. My friend’s name is Li Ming. These are his parents. This is his father’s computer. It’s black and it is on the desk. This is his mother’s watch. It’s on the bed and it’s blue. The boy is his brother. The baseball is his. It’s green and it’s under the bed. The girl is his sister. Her pencil box is in her schoolbag. It is red. Li Ming and I like the photo very much.

解析試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作不難，首先介紹這個(gè)我朋友的全家福照片It is my friend’s family photo.然后按照題目的提示分別介紹他們是誰(shuí)，所有的東西，所在的位置，如This is his father’s computer. It’s black and it is on the desk.及The girl is his sister. Her pencil box is in her schoolbag.等逐條進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，描寫(xiě)位置關(guān)系時(shí)注意使用on,in,under,beside等詞。最后一句話進(jìn)行總結(jié)Li Ming and I like the photo very much.
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)，對(duì)該照片的相關(guān)內(nèi)容都要描寫(xiě)到。初一的作文著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，考試時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。