Question

假如你是一名產(chǎn)品推銷員，你是如何推銷你的產(chǎn)品呢？請根據(jù)下面提示的內(nèi)容，用80 次左右的短文向你的顧客介紹你的產(chǎn)品————毛衣。（sweater）
產(chǎn)地---- 上海   面料----羊毛（wool）價格 120—150元件     用途---保暖
特點(diǎn)---柔軟(soft)、舒適(comfortable)、各種顏色、各種尺寸大小齊全、樣式時尚
作文：（15分）
Please come and buy the sweater.
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Answer 1

Please come and buy the sweater. The sweater is made in Shanghai. And it is made of wool. So it is soft and comfortable. If you are afraid of the cold weather in winter, just come here and buy one. It can help you have a warm winter. The sweaters have all kinds of color and sizes. And the styles are different and very fashion. All of you can choose one that fit you. The price is very low. It’s only between 120 yuan and 150 yuan.

試題分析：這是篇給材料作文。根據(jù)題中所給的材料來介紹產(chǎn)品。材料中包含了很多信息，寫作前要理清頭緒，如何將這些信息很好的組織在一起，并通過正確的語言將其表述清楚�？梢赃m當(dāng)?shù)氖褂脤W(xué)過的復(fù)雜句子給文章增添色彩。還可使用一些連接詞使文章更具邏輯。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇作文緊扣材料，要點(diǎn)完整，并將各要點(diǎn)整理有序，使文章條理清楚。文中用了一些很好的句子和表達(dá)方式，如：And it is made of wool.它是由羊毛制成；be made of由……制成。If you are afraid of the cold weather in winter, just come here and buy one如果你害怕冬天寒冷的氣候，過來買一件吧。If引導(dǎo)了一個條件狀語從句。All of you can choose one that fit you所有人都能找到適合自己的一件毛衣。That引導(dǎo)了定語從句。