Question

6月5日( June 5)是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日，
我們周圍的環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕，污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重……。假如你是學(xué)生Jone.，你校要進(jìn)行“如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?”專題演講比賽，要求：
1、舉例說(shuō)明環(huán)境存在的問(wèn)題1—3方面;
2、如何保護(hù)好我們的環(huán)境，采取怎樣的措施，舉例1—3方面進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，字80左右。              
  Dear headmasters,teachers,classmates and friends:
                                                                        
                                                                            

Answer 1

Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows. 
As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .
In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.  “There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料很籠統(tǒng)，這就需要我們用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如:  have no clean water to drink.沒(méi)有喝的干凈的水； go to school on foot or by bike步行或騎自行車去學(xué)校；In a word 總而言之；if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.如果每個(gè)人都多加保護(hù)環(huán)境，將會(huì)有更少的污染，我們的生活也會(huì)變得更美好。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.