Question

親愛的同學(xué)，初中生活很快就要結(jié)束了。回顧三年的生活，你一定有很多收獲吧。假如你叫李明，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike對(duì)中國(guó)學(xué)生的生活非常感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封信談一談你自己在初中三年里的美好回憶與收獲。
1.學(xué)校生活（喜歡的老師，喜歡的學(xué)科，取得的進(jìn)步等）
2.課外生活（興趣，愛好，交友等）
3.……
注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)80—100；2.請(qǐng)結(jié)合實(shí)際增加細(xì)節(jié)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、姓名或透露與個(gè)人身份相關(guān)的其他信息；4.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your last letter.I'm very happy to tell you something about my middle school life.
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What  about you？Can you write to tell me  something about your school life?                                                                                                                         
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Mike,
　　Thanks for your last letter.I'm very happy to tell you something about my middle school life.
　　In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness.  Mr. Li is my math teacher.He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. He was always very kind to every student. As an experienced teacher, he was respected and loved by all his students.
　　I have many interests. Swimming, reading and movie are my favorites, which bring color to my busy study life. Besides, I am easygoing and likely to make friends with others. Friendship is an important part of my life.This is my middle school life.What  about you？Can you write to tell me  something about your school life?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一寫自己初中三年的回憶與收獲。由于在要點(diǎn)中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是一般現(xiàn)在及過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。