分析下面的書(shū)面表達(dá),指出其中的錯(cuò)誤.
目前中學(xué)生出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象非;鸨,很多家長(zhǎng)也為此不惜代價(jià);請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀銓?duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法,是先上完高中打好基礎(chǔ)再出國(guó)好,還是趁早出去好.
At present, in order to let their children receive better education, some parents send their children abroad to study. This results in that (1) more and more students want to go to (2) abroad to study without finishing their study in the middle school. In my own (3) opinion, I think it is not necessary to go abroad so early.
First, the education system and teaching methods are different with (4) ours. I doubt whether you can learn normally abroad. Besides, the cost is very expensive (5) in foreign countries. Since you can not earn enough money by yourself, you have to ask your parents for money. On the other hand, your (6) knowledge is limited for you haven't finished middle school yet. It is not worth spending so much money to study abroad.
I suggested (7) to students that they finish middle school and then go to university in their own country. After graduation, you (8) can go abroad to make a further study. That will be much better.
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解題思路:(1)This results in that改為“As a result,”.因?yàn)?results后面的in為介詞,一般介詞后面不能接that引導(dǎo)的從句. (2)由于abroad為副詞,它前面的to為介詞,而介詞后面應(yīng)接名詞、代詞,因此,to應(yīng)去掉. (3)own應(yīng)改為 personal.In one's personal opinion為一個(gè)固定習(xí)語(yǔ). (4)with應(yīng)改為 from.be different from為一個(gè)固定搭配. (5)expensive應(yīng)改為high,因?yàn)椤皟r(jià)值、價(jià)格”應(yīng)該與“高(high)、低(low)”搭配.我們可以說(shuō)Something is expensive/cheap. (6)your改為our.因?yàn)榭忌救艘彩菍W(xué)生.只有這樣才符合邏輯. (7)根據(jù)短文的整體時(shí)態(tài),suggested應(yīng)必為suggest. (8)根據(jù)短文中的最后一段里的I suggest to students that…,從而可以推出 you應(yīng)改為 she or he才符合邏輯. |
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