Question

假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文給瑪麗回一封電子郵件，建議她來(lái)你所在的學(xué)校。理由是：

1．學(xué)校每年都接納交換生；

2．學(xué)校條件好，各種設(shè)施好，有圖書(shū)館，電子閱覽室……；

3．課外活動(dòng)豐富多彩；

4．你校學(xué)生英語(yǔ)水平好，易于交流；

5．老師平易近人，教法生動(dòng)有趣

注意：

1．可根據(jù)要求加以必要發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；

2．詞數(shù)為120左右；

3．電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù)）。

參考詞匯：設(shè)施：facility  電子閱覽室：electro – reading – room

Hi Mary.

Nice to read your e – mail today.

As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend …

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Hope you’ll like my school                                                                      

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Mary,                                                                     

Nice to read your e-mail today.                                              

As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend my school. The followings are the reasons.

First, exchange students are welcomed in my school; besides, we have first-class facilities: the labs, modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students, offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends. After-class we have varies of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves. And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates. The teachers are kind and ready to offer help, whose unique ways of teaching help make their class lively and interesting. We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class, thus I do believe that you won’t have any difficulty in communicating with us.

Hope you’ll like my school                                                                      

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。