Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
There is a crack in everything, and that is how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, a Canadian singer)
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個事例；
④文中不得透露個人姓名和班級；
⑤詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

I still remember the day when I was left alone at home .I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back ,I was so fearful that I didn't tell the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust .The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled to me. From then on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot. The accident, or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior.
It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clearly.

解析試題分析：考查開放性短文閱讀。話題是There is a crack in everything,沒有什么事情是完美的。任何事物都有自己的瑕疵之處。關(guān)鍵在于我們該怎么理解�？梢赃x取生活中發(fā)生的一件與此有關(guān)的實例來說明任何事物都有瑕疵，但是并不影響價值。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
考點：考查開放性作文
點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。