V. Write the first draft according to the given situation. 根據(jù)所給情境,完成初稿。
情境:請給你的好友寄送一張全家福照片,并寫信介紹你的家庭。內(nèi)容包括:1. 照片描述；2. 家庭成員基本信息介紹。
Dear
Mary
,
I am sending you a photo of my family. Let me introduce them to you. In the middle of the photo is my grandfather. His name is Wang Lin and he is wearing glasses. Next to him is my grandmother, Li Hua. She has white hair and looks very kind. The man in a blue shirt is my father, Tom. He is a doctor and works in a big hospital. The woman with long black hair is my mother, Lucy. She is a teacher and teaches English. The little girl in a pink dress is me, Lily. I am a student. We are all smiling in the photo. I love my family very much.
Yours sincerely,
Lily
Ⅵ. Tick the boxes of the checklist to evaluate your first draft. 對照檢查表,評價初稿。
Checklist
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I clearly mentioned the family members and their names.
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I briefly described the features of the family members, such as appearance and clothes.
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I briefly introduced the jobs of some members.
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I spelled the words correctly.
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I used sentence structures such as "My/His/Her name is ...", "He/She is ...", "He/She works as ..." in the writing.
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I used proper punctuation and the simple present tense.
